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Throughout this semester I have learned many ways of writing through two main essays literacy narrative and comparison and contrast. These two essays have taught me how to correctly fix my comma splices, thesis statements, and capitalization.
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The literacy narrative essay really did not have much comma splices, but overall I continued to try to make my paper a little better. Literacy narrative essay was a lot easier than the comparison and contrast essay. My thesis statement was ridiculous when it came down to typing and writing essays.
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Peer editing is a lot of help on reviewing papers and correcting mistakes. Taking English 101 has prepared me for the rest of my English classes I will be taking in the future.
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This is shown at the end of my second paragraph where I state, I learned a very valuable lesson the hard way and now I have a second chance to make my parents proud and become successful. With the proper use of commas an essay progresses from word on a paper to an easy to follow and understandable literary work.
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I am glad I was able to fix my faults and write a great paper. I think you will enjoy my portfolio and be more than happy to pass me.
Throughout the semester you 're teaching improved the way I look at the sources and my paper as a whole. This happened multiple times and I struggled to catch back up.
my strengths I count on my sincerity and straightforwardness in my writin... . weaknesses mostly lie within transitions and proper comma placement.
The writer lacks basic control of syntax (see the first sentence of the third paragraph) and vocabulary (“Romantic illness”), and some statements make no logical or syntactic sense at all (see the third sentence of the second paragraph and the first sentence of the third paragraph). The essay suffers from an accumulation of errors, especially errors...
I enjoyed learning new things every week and look forward to writing more in the future. With an abundance of hard work, reading essays and novels, going through the eLearning modules, and the help of my teacher and classmates, I have gained the self-assurance I needed to write well and understand the writing process.
Although I seemed to have a bit of difficulty integrating quotes and comma splices, I have learned through doing revisions of papers. By doing this, my writing skill will more dynamic and won’t be so one-noted.
He writes, “I found this sick arrowhead and I will stick it into one of his low-profile tire.” The mistake occurs between the words “arrowhead” and “and.” Pidd has failed to punctuate two independent clauses, “I found this sick arrowhead” and “I will stick it into one of his low-profile tires.” He can fix this error by separating the two independent...
My first essay was the Narrative in which I wrote about the night of my mothers arrest. In which I read over comments made before hand and digested them myself and walked in with an idea on how to make my paper better, answer questions you may have had towards my paper, and had questions on what I could do to make my paper better.
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